The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking various courses at a particular university. It shows how many students considered various aspects of their courses "very good".
The table chart compares data about freshmen
students
,who study in
several courses,mainly Change preposition
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Economics
,Law
and Commerce
and important aspects in
their study in one university.
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Overall
,it is clear that
students
in Commerce
studied better than others. Moreover
, all students
were good at Tutor support.
Although
people in Economics
got 55% in Pre-course information,Law
and Commerce
students
had 72% and 95% in Teaching quality students
in Economics
and Commerce
had similar percents, 95%. The law
course had only 67%. Additionally
, Commencement had 93% in Tutor support.However
, Economics
got 92% and lawyers had 79% respectively. Furthermore
,
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Economics
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Law
students
and 81% had by Commerce
students
. Another interesting thing is that in other recourses if 62% of students
in economics
were good, students
in Commerce
got 86%. And 80% gotten by law
students
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