The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015.
The bar chart shows the information
of
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an
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smokers
, broken down into seven different countries along with
the world average in 2000 and 2015, indicated in percentages.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that Egypt and Lebanon experienced an upward trend, whereas
that of the remaining five nations as well as
the world underwent a declined rate. However
, it is interesting to note that Australian male smokers
accounted for the lowest statistics among these nations in both comparing years.
To begin
with, in 2000, at approximately 66%, Armenia had the highest number of male smokers
among others, followed by Bangladesh and Cuba at slightly above 60% and 50%, respectively. While
these three aforementioned countries outnumbered that of the average global satistics
, at about 42%, the other three nations: Egypt, Lebanon, and Mexico, shared similar percentages at 35%. Correct your spelling
statistics
Hence
, Australia was only just under 30%, at 28%.
Five years later, in 2015, a closer look at the bar chart show
that the trend shifted a little, where both Cubanian and Armenian Change the verb form
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smokers
were the greatest at roughly 52%. surprisingly, Australia's remained stable at its last
rank, at 18%.Submitted by kamonluck1999 on
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