The map below shows the development of the museum between 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the museum between 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
map
depicts the evolution of the museum between
from
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2010 to 2013 After analysing the
map
, it is clearly seen that in 2010, the
area
of the north-east was covered with gardens
while
in 2013,
this
area
is
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replaced by mammals and human origin display.
Furthermore
, in 2010, there was a garden in the
south-west
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however
this
is occupied by a shop and cafe.
Additionally
, the north-west of the former
map
was covered by mammals whilst in the later
map
it is replaced by ice age and insects in the corner of the
map
.
Furthermore
, discussing the
south-west
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of
the
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both maps, the
area
remains the same without any changes, in 2010
this
area
was covered by dinosaurs
while
in 2013 no changes occurred.Moving toward the Center of
the
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both maps, the bottom of both maps consists of the entrance, ticket desk , and
the
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lobby were in the same place
whereas
the ocean in the upper part of the
map
was in the same place in 2013.
Overall
,
it is clear that
many developments have been made from 2010 to 2013.some places were changed
while
some were in the same place.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 9 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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