The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph
are showing
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shows

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multiple
time visiting
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visits

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to see
variety
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a variety
the variety

The noun phrase variety seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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of art galleries in 2011.
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Linking Words

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Louvre
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the Louvre

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france art gallerie are high visitor as
compare
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compared

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to
metropolitan
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the metropolitan

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Use synonyms

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museum
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museums

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USA on the other side bristish gallerie are slightly increase
national
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the national

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museum
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of
korea
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Korea

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are same as
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the museo
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museo
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Museo

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prado
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Prado

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state
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the state

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hemitage
russia
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Russia

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are
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is

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just
little
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a little

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low. As We can
louvre france gallerie
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Louvre France Gallerie

The word louvre france gallerie doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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are
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has

There may be a verb use issue here.

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8.9 million visitors but when we check the
metropoliton
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Metropoliton

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USA
are
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apply

The verb are appears to be unnecessary here.

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just 60 lakh visitors
but
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apply

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when we check out
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the british
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british
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British

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museum
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there viewer is near to Metropoliton.
National
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The national

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Use synonyms

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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

museum
Capitalize word
Museum

The word museum should be capitalized in this context.

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of
korea
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Korea

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are low number of
viewer
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viewers

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as
compare
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compared

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to
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the british
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british
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British

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it's just 3.1M but when we check carefully museo del prado spain is 3M on the other-hand stage hermitage Russia
are
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just 2.9
Customer
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Customers

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Add more linking words.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • visitor numbers
  • fluctuations
  • peak season
  • off-peak season
  • trend
  • visitor demographics
  • attendance
  • special exhibition
  • promotional campaign
  • footfall
  • gallery capacity
  • cultural attraction
  • art enthusiasts
  • exhibit
  • statistical comparison
  • tourist attraction
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