Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There is a strong debate whether the

government

shuld has

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should have

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access to check the private

messages

and calls of the citizens or not. It is agreed that

people

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phone calls and

messages

must stay confidential and private but as long as

this

access will

safe

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save

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life

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lives

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and protect the community,

then

I

am totally agree

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with letting the

government

to

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apply

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check

messages

and calls to serve the country.

However

,

this

essay

,

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will discuss why

such

an information

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information

a piece of information

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should be reachable and give examples to illustrate the condition. On one hand, some individuals complain that some security

agenies

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agencies

which

is belong

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belong

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to the

government

keep

spy

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spying

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on their private calls and texts

while

they have not

give

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given

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any consent

regard

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this

issue. These people only think about

them

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themselves

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selfs

with

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apply

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entirly

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entirely

neglect

the

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apply

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home security and safety.

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, a lot of

terriorst

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terrorist

attacks were stopped before

it

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they

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happened just because the

government

discovered the plan on text

messages

and phone calls.

On the other hand

, advancement of the technology and mobile applications

have

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helped terrible people to use it in

a

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the

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wrong way.

For instance

, some teenagers

used

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use

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some apps to record girls in videos and blackmail them. So,

as a result

, some young girls were mentally and

psycologically

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psychologically

effected

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affected

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because of

misuse

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the misuse

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of

this

technology.

Therefore

, once the

ministry

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Ministry

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of

security

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Security

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of each country can access these apps,

this

will lead to captured criminals and prevent

harms

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harm

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before

its

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it

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happen

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happens

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.

To sum up

,

although

each

humen

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human

being

have

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has

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the right to have secrets and private life, the

government

must explain

this

is an

urgency

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urgent

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method to keep and secure the safety of the community.