The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below illustrates the yearly income of the families living in the United States. Over the period of 8 years, we can
spectate
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see
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that not every household earns the same way, which the illustration
also
shows, starting in 2007 and ending in 2015. Generally, we can say that in the first year, 29 million earned 100,000$ or more than in 2011, when less than 2 million reached that kind of earning.
This
all changed when 4 years later it all increased and reached
its
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the
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highest that it had ever been. 2011 is the year when all the other incomes that were below 100,000$ were much higher
then
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than
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in the past and the future. The peak point of the year is that the most common income was between 25,000-49,999$, which was relatively high compared to 2007.
Overall
there
has
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been no drastic differences over the years, and we can point out with the help of the chart.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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