The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items on five different countries in 2002.
The table show's percentage of
consumer
expenditure for three categories of products and survives
in five different countries in 2002
Wrong verb form
survived
Overall
, the largest proportion of consumer
spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco, whereas
the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.
Looking to
the details, the highest number of food/drinks and tobacco was 31.14% in Turkey, Change preposition
at
while
the lowest one was 15.77% in Sweden. Consumer
spending 28.91
% in Ireland, Add a missing verb
was 28.91
whereas
in Spain it was 18.80%. Moreover
, in Italy proportion of food/drinks and tobacco category was just 16.36%. In clothing
and footwear section Ireland and Turkey Correct article usage
the clothing
has
kinda similar percentages ( 6.43% and 6.63%). Change the verb form
have
Consumer
lavishing in clothing and footwear 9.00
% in Italy, at the same time it was 6.51% and 5.40% in Spain and Sweden.
Leisure/education has the lowest proportion in Spain ( 1.98%). Italy and Sweden Add a missing verb
was 9.00
has
the same number ( 3.20% and 3.22%). Whilst, Change the verb form
have
digit
in Ireland was 2.21%. Add an article
a digit
the digit
Although
only 4.35% was spending
by Replace the word
spent
consumer
in Turkey.Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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