the graph below show the sales of children's books, adult fiction books and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons when relevant.

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The provided line graph compares sales of three different

books

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(children's

books

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, adult fiction and

eudcational

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educational

book) over 5 years in one nation. At first glance,

it is clear that

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children's

books

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sale

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had an increase,

while

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adult fiction

books

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lost their interest during

this

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period.

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the shape, Adult fiction had the most sale with more

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than

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milion dollors

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million dollars

in 2002,

then

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in 2003, the graph

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dramatice

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dramatic

decrese

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decrease

but by 2004 it had a slight increase and

then

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started to fall and reached

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apply

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milion

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million

dollars

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in sale

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sale

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sales

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In addition

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, the education

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sales started from 22

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milion

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million

dollars

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in 2002 and had few fluctuations by 2005 and rose sharply after 2005.

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, the children's

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that started from 30

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milion

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million

dollars

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in 2002 increased considerably to 42

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milion

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million

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by 2003

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and

then

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experienced a slight increase

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during

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3 years and rose

dramatially

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dramatically

from 2005.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sales trends
Fluctuations
Significant increases/decreases
Overall trend
Comparison
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