New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

The

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of

technology

,

it

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has changed the way people spend their leisure time, especially

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children

.

Although

technology

is an excellent source of information and has helped

children

grow smart, the excessive

use

of

multimedia

by

children

has negative implications

on

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their health and

career

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.

This

essay will discuss the drawbacks of

technology

on young ones with reasons and related examples. Nowadays, the

use

of

technology

has made little minds smarter and better aware of their surroundings. But, it has led to detrimental effects on the body and mind of

children

.

For example

, studies show that there is a there are number of

children

who have diabetes and various other heart issues. It is a result of

children

watching their favourite shows or playing video games on television rather than playing in a park with friends.

Therefore

, technologies are

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on

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the health of the little ones. Another disadvantage of a rise in the

use

of

multimedia

is that

children

have become

direction-less

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. They have lost interest in books, leading to poor grades in exams.

For example

,

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one research argued that students who failed

last

year revealed that these students under-performed

due to

over-

use

of various forms of media. Indeed, there is a negative impact of new technologies on

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career

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. In conclusion,

although

the

use

of

multimedia

provides knowledge to little minds and makes them intelligent, the

ill-effects

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on health and studies

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the advantages of a rise in new technologies entirely.

Therefore

, it is the responsibility of parents to motivate

children

to play in

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and to highlight the importance of education so that the younger generation can productively

use

multimedia

.