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The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1991- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The amount of three types of
jam
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 in food baskets in an Asian country between 1991 and 2014 is depicted in the graph.
Overall
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, it is immediately apparent that strawberry and lemon
jam
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 usage witnessed a general fall,
while
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 the amount of cherry
jam
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 eaten showed significant growth during the
last
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 eight years. There was a slight increase in the consumption of Strawberry
jam
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 from approximately 140
tons
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 in 1991 to just 160
tons
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 over the five following years before it started to decline by about 50
tons
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 by 2014.
Although
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 eating Lemon
jam
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 followed the merely same trend in
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 timeline, it fluctuated from the initial until 2011, showing roughly the same weight ( around 90
tons
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)
On the other hand
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, people in
this
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 country started to consume Cherry
jam
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, which was just over 5
tons
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 in 2008, but it surged significantly by over 80
tons
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 and hit its peak by 2011. Over the three following years, it saw a slight decrease by just about 70
tons
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, which is recognized as the most popular
jam
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at the end
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 of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words jam, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • upward trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • stable
  • popular
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