The line graph shows TV news viewing figures over a one-year period. Write a report of at least 150 words summarizing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The charts
depicts
Change the verb form
depict
distribution
of Add an article
the distribution
time
where
Correct word choice
when
people
watches
Correct subject-verb agreement
watch
TV
within one year. Overall
Te
Correct your spelling
The
number
of people
watching TV
witnessed fluctuatuation
at three category stream Correct your spelling
fluctuation
time
with most Fix the agreement mistake
times
people
consider to watch at 6 pm
. On the other side, there are stready
in the amount of viewers at 1 Correct your spelling
already
steady
pm
.
TV
is being watched by people
at
before midnight is in Change preposition
apply
fluctuate
trends. In the evening, which is 6 Change the verb form
fluctuating
pm
, people
enjoy tv
programme the most, despite its decreasing Correct article usage
the tv
number
over the year. On the other hand
, residents experience different habit
of Fix the agreement mistake
habits
seeing
Verb problem
watching
tv
at 9.30 Correct your spelling
TV
pm
and 11 pm
. At half past nine, with its noticable
high start points, witnessed steady trends before Correct your spelling
noticeable
reach
its lowest screen Wrong verb form
reaching
time
on
August Change preposition
in
then
rocketed back to the
considerable Correct article usage
a
number
which is around three millions
views. Change to singular
million
In contrast
to earlier
Correct article usage
the earlier
time
frame
, Fix the agreement mistake
frames
people
first are less in
Change preposition
apply
favorable
in Change the spelling
favourable
to do
so Change the verb form
doing
at
before midnight , Change preposition
apply
however
reach its
peak point at the same Correct pronoun usage
their
time
as the previous one.
Different
dynamic is seen by the Add an article
A different
number
of people
watching at 1 pm
. After midnight, little
amount of Correct word choice
a small
people
prefer to do this
activity. The number
is consistent throughout the year around 1,5 million per day.Submitted by auzarinawukirasih19 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, people, tv, number, pm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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