The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Writing Task 1

The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events.

Summarise the information by selecting and  reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

IELTS Writing Task 1
The table illustrates the experiment and observation about reasons for attending the events of art in the UK through adults.
Overall
, there are 4 main reasons and changing for almost 20
years
. All percentages have stable or rising trends, excluding
for
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special occasions and
celebration
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celebrations
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. As seen in the statistics, most people
are
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go to events because of special artists.
For example
, humans who visit these events,
due to
desire to see specific
performer
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performers
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were approximately 58%, twenty
years
ago.
However
, ten
years
after
this
proportion had decreased to nearly 55%, and nowadays
this
rate increased
for
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almost 1%, more
preciesly
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precisely
56%. As shown in the illustration,
attenders
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who accompany children
are
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24%,
although
20
years
ago
this
rate was only 9%, and had improved to approximately 15%. Businessmen or workers come to
arts
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the arts
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, because of their jobs, and they had only
rising
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a rising
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trend, which was 6% and 10% in two timelines, and after the index
are
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nearly 11%. People who let to go to
special
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the special
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celebration were 27%. But in the
last
timelines
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theey
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they
were 20% and 9%, respectively.
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