This charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

This charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and  make comparisons where relevant.
The graph and diagram above show
dance
classes attended by youngsters in one of the cities in Australia. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is evident that private
studios
are chosen the most as the location to learn dances
while
the least chosen
is
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are
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school-based
studios
. In terms of
dance
type, ballet is more preferred by younger people under 11 years old, and the older they are, modern
dance
become
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becomes
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more popular. In regards to venues to learn dances, private
studios
are the most popular location. It is chosen by nearly half of the teenagers, followed by school halls that are preferred by almost a quarter of youngsters in Australia. The popularity of school halls is followed by community halls and
college- based
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college-based
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studios
that
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which
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are picked by 18% and 10% of teenagers respectively. It makes the school-based
studios
become the least
favorite
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favourite
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location to master dances. In terms of
dance
type, it is apparent that ballet is preferred by younger people, around 600 ballet students are under 11 years old. The older they are, the preference
shifted
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shifts
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towards tap and modern
dance
. Modern
dance
is well-liked by older students, just a little above 500 of them attended the modern
dance
class.
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