The following pie charts show the main modes of transportation people used to to travel to university for work or study in 2004 and 2009.
The above two pie charts demonstrate the
percentage
of people transportation methods are used to go to university for work or study in 2004 compared to 2009.
The most significant feature is bus received the strongest score
in 2009.However
, the highest percentage
in 2004 was related to car users. In addition
, tain received the weakest number in both years.
It is noticeable that the car percentage
had
51% in 2004 Verb problem
was
then
started to decrease sharply in 2009 to 28%.Moreover
, In contrast
, the bus score
shows a dramatically
growth from 33% in 2004 to 46% in 2009.Change the adverb
dramatic
In addition
, the bicycle percentage
was 9% in 2004 then
started to increase gradually to 16% in 2004. However
, the walking score
exhibited approximetaly
a similar amount in both years which Correct your spelling
approximately
is
4% in 2004 and 6% in 2009. Wrong verb form
was
In addition
, trains contribute
the lowest Wrong verb form
contributed
score
in both years with 3% in 2004 and 4% in 2009.Submitted by rahafalkhashti7 on
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