The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. to what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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two decades, the societal position of

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has changed significantly. Some believe

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to be the reason behind problems like minor

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, as married

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work and are not at home to look after their children all the time. I strongly disagree with

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because a

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's upbringing is a combined effort and dependent on many environmental and cultural factors. Juvenile

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have happened irrespective of the working status of the

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. Bringing up a

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right depends on the quality of values imparted equally by both parents and not just the

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. If the woman is available all the time, but the father stays absent or is abusive, it is a recipe for a disastrous upbringing.

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, in India, most minor

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reported were from families where

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did not work and were even aware of the tendencies. So a conservative approach cannot ensure the right upbringing.

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, married housewives taking care of their children

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never been able to reduce the chances of

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because a

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's character is heavily shaped by the kind of environment they are brought up in. A perfectly available mother combined with an abusive or immature partner would teach patriarchy to the

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and normalize crime for him. Another place where they could get derailed is the kind of friends that they hang out with during their teenage. Teenagers may pick up criminal tendencies from evil elements in

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society.

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, In the UK, teenagers picked up minor

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at schools or playgrounds, with minimal awareness of

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at home.

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,

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are not solely responsible for a

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and restricting them at home would in no way assure. Juvenile

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will keep happening until the

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is brought equally with good values and subjected to the right environment.