Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say Agree to this arrangement. Say what time is suitable for you. *Describe what you are planning to do.

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Dear John, I hope

this

message finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to discuss

about

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the weekend plan with

kids

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the kids

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. I know

its

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it's

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been two months

our

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since our

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kids didn't meet with each other. As you know I was very busy with my work

didn't

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and didn't

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got

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enough

time

Last

week when I got your message that you want to send your children to my home I felt very happy. So, I decided to make a schedule for what things they will do for that day.

Firstly

, you can send them around 12pm. By that

time

I will prepare lunch for them I will make pasta with noodles as my son and your kids really love it.After

that

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that,

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I will give them some outdoor activities like kind of playing with trees or sand.And

then

they can spend

sometime

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some time

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for

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doing

there

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their

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school work.I am pretty sure by that

time

they will feel hungry so I will make smoothies for them. Later, in the night

time

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they can watch

movie

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a movie

the movie

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dinner, I am planning to make chicken. I hope everything will be fine

for

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you, if you want me to change anything just let me know I will do it. Hope to hear back soon Yours sincerely, Sim

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Coherence and Cohesion

Try to improve logical structure by using clear transitions between sentences and paragraphs.

Coherence and Cohesion

Break down your ideas into separate paragraphs to increase clarity.

Task Achievement

You have successfully addressed all parts of the task, agreeing to the arrangement and providing detailed plans.

Task Achievement

The tone is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately used for informal correspondence.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

205 words

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Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say *Agree to this arrangement. *Say what time is suitable for you. *Describe what you are planning to do.

Structure your letter

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