Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say *Agree to this arrangement. *Say what time is suitable for you. *Describe what you are planning to do.
Dear John,
I hope
this
message finds you well. I am writing this
letter to discuss about
the weekend plan with Remove the preposition
apply
kids
.
I know Correct article usage
the kids
its
been two months Correct your spelling
it's
our
kids didn't meet with each other. As you know I was very busy with my work Correct word choice
since our
didn't
Correct word choice
and didn't
got
enough Change the form of the verb
get
time
.Last
week when I got your message that you want to send your children to my home I felt very happy. So, I decided to make a schedule for what things they will do for that day.Firstly
, you can send them around 12pm. By that time
I will prepare lunch for them I will make pasta with noodles as my son and your kids really love it.After that
I will give them some outdoor activities like kind of playing with trees or sand.And Add a comma
that,
then
they can spend sometime
Replace the word
some time
for
doing Change preposition
apply
there
school work.I am pretty sure by that Replace the word
their
time
they will feel hungry so I will make smoothies for them. Later, in the night time
they can watch Add a comma
time,
movie
.Add an article
a movie
the movie
In
dinner, I am planning to make chicken. I hope everything will be fine Change preposition
For
for
you, if you want me to change anything just let me know I will do it.
Hope to hear back soon
Yours sincerely,
SimChange preposition
with
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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to improve logical structure by using clear transitions between sentences and paragraphs.
Coherence and Cohesion
Break down your ideas into separate paragraphs to increase clarity.
Task Achievement
You have successfully addressed all parts of the task, agreeing to the arrangement and providing detailed plans.
Task Achievement
The tone is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used for informal correspondence.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.