Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In every country on the planet, there is a disagreement around the topic of
future
planning. With
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upcoming
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time
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some folks assert that
individuals
and nations should live in
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present moment and don´t think about
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. In my contend, I
am disagree
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with
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a numerous reasons that
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future
planning is paramount for upcoming timing and present
time
. First and foremost, if
individuals
reckon about their coming
time
;
therefore
can utilize their present
time
in positive ways. For instance, a survey conducted by
Time
News of India indicates that students who think about their
future
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have 50% more opportunities to
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success in life rather than students who live in
current
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time
and don´t have
future
plans
.
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the
future
of the
individuals
.
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, in view of countries there
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future
plans
. To
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with, in various regions when
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elected
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by citizens, they start working on
future
actions. In many countries legal bodies always prepare
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their
five years
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action plan;
hence
these
plans
help
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to
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achieve
their
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goals in
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five years.
For example
, an article written by the University of New York
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that almost 90%
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units
makes
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their
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action
plans
in advance. In a nutshell, there is no doubt that
individuals
should
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their present moment;
nevertheless
, having
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plan
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the
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ways of life.With these
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people can
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their
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more meaningful ways.
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task achievement
The essay should provide a more complete response to the task by ensuring that each paragraph fully develops a specific point related to the topic. Consider elaborating on the idea of enjoying the present and its potential benefits for a balanced view.
coherence cohesion
Ensure your ideas are clearly and comprehensively presented by organizing them into distinct paragraphs with clear topic sentences. Current transitions between paragraphs could be smoother to improve flow.
task achievement
The essay makes an effort to present a clear argument against the notion that living in the present is more important than planning for the future.
task achievement
Good use of examples, like referencing a survey by Time News of India, to support the points made. This adds depth to the argument.
coherence cohesion
An introduction and conclusion are present, providing a complete structure to the essay.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Present enjoyment
  • Future planning
  • Long-term satisfaction
  • Short-term gratification
  • Economic planning
  • Infrastructure development
  • Spontaneity
  • Immediate pleasures
  • Balanced approach
  • Mindfulness
  • Strategic foresight
  • Anticipation
  • Well-being
  • Present-mindedness
  • Prosperity
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