The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities in the last 4 weeks.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities in the last 4 weeks.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of those who purchased fresh and instant
coffee
and drank
coffee
or tea in a cafe in the
last
four weeks in different cities in Australia.
Overall
, the rate of those who drink in a cafe is the largest in all cities
while
the consumption of fresh
coffee
is the lowest. Starting with the percentage of those who went to a cafe, the graphs for Melbourne and Hobart are the highest with both just below 65%, followed by Sydney with just above 60%.
In contrast
, Adelaide has the lowest percentage with nearly 50% with Brisbane being a little higher with about 55%. Turning to fresh
coffee
, whose consumption is the lowest in all areas, Sydney has the largest, followed by Melbourne and
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Hobart
with all being around 40%. Indeed, the drinking habit of fresh
coffee
is by far the least in Brisbane and Adelaide with below 35%.
Finally
, with regard to the consumption of instant
coffee
, people in
Hobar
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Hobart
drink the most with just under 55%, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide with about 53%
abd
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and
50%, respectively.
However
, people in Sydney drink instant
coffee
the least with just over 45%.
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