The pie charts below show the frequency of snacking in children while playing electronic games. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the frequency of snacking in children while playing electronic games. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart depicts the children's eating habits
while
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playing digital video
games
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on Mobile phones, laptops, tablets, Desktop computers, Flat-screen
TVs
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and Conventional
TVs
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Conventional had a drastic drop after a decade with the lowest consumed video
games
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,
likewise
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, Desktop computers and laptops had a similar gradual fall throughout the years.
However
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, tablets, Mobile phones and Flat-screen
TVs
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had a positive soar in terms of usage throughout the time period.
To begin
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with, snacking
while
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playing
games
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on Conventional TV had the highest market share in 2009 with 34%, but after a decade it plummeted to 30% (4%).
Similarly
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,
games
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like Desktop computers and Laptops
also
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illustrate a similar ratio of 8% and stood at 12% in 2019.
In addition
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, in 2009 Flat-screen
TVs
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and tablets were captured below 10 percent of the portion
however
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, in 2019 they had an increment of 19% (27%) and 14% (19%).
Lastly
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, Mobile phones
also
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had a lucrative push throughout the decade of 11% and stood at 26%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words games, tvs with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • frequency
  • dominant
  • category
  • contrast
  • trend
  • common
  • rare
  • snack
  • habits
  • patterns
  • lifestyle
  • health consciousness
  • gaming habits
  • observed
  • unexpected
  • noticeable
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