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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
#minutes #station #passenger #numbers #london #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The line graph
depict
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depicts
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 the number of commuters marshall facilities at The Underground Stations of London. The
unit
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 are measured in one-hour
interval
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intervals
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.
Overall
, people fluctuated in
utilize
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 the trains to their destinations. There are two
type
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types
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 of pattern, which
is
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are
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range
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a range
the range
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 that
spotted
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 dramatically and the moderate swift ones. Dramatically changes
was
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 witnessed between 6 to 10 in the morning and 16 until 20 in the evening. Beginning at precisely
at
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100 people in total in the morning, congestion of citizens reached its peak at 400 followed by drastically
hit
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 the bottom at 10.
Then
 nearly similar to previous ones, residents experienced
noticable
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noticeable
 upward and downward but plummeted
at
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to
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 slightly above 100. Moderate swift was spotted in the range of 10 to 16 pm. Beginning at nearly 200 people, commuters rose gradually before stable from 12 to 14.
Then
 the following hours until 16, the total amount of them fell and hit its lowest point
at the end
 of
this
 spectrum.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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