The diagram shows the process of making coffee. Write a report of at least 150 words showing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of
coffee
production, which consists of three important stages, including, growing coffee
beans, transporting, and grinding.
First,
in the growing process, farmers in hot countries like Brazil, Kenya, and Colombia will grow coffee
on their land. Next,
they will harvest them when they are ripe. After that, they will be sorted out by hand based on their quality before being cleaned with a sieve and water.
In the next stage, they must be dried in the sun for four weeks before they are transported to the factory. Later, the dried beans will be delivered and distributed to the factory by a truck. Then
, the factory worker will process and grind them to powder by using a coffee
machine. Lastly
, the finished coffee
powdered will be packed in sacks before they are sent to distributors all over the world by using the plane.
In conclusion, the production of coffee
is a complex one that is
both labour and capital-intensive within a longer duration of time.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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