The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the transformation planning of a new town.
Overall
, there will be many spots for residents with some transportation and entertainment facilities. By providing many facilities,
road
infrastructure is expected to be built to accommodate citizens. In the centre of the new town, there will be some parking areas and bus stands with some branch roads which will be connected to a ring
road
. Around them,
then
, some housing sites with several recreational places will be built adjacent to the ring
road
.
Thus
, future visitors can easily reach the vacation sites by bus or safely park their vehicles near them. Looking at the outer side of the round
road
, there will be two large industries which will be located across from each other.
Additionally
, the resident sites will be spread and fill all the spaces around the ring
road
and there will be a small recreational area next to a way which is directly accessed to the round
road
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential housing
  • ring road
  • local roads
  • commercial zones
  • inhabitants
  • transportation system
  • bus terminals
  • train stations
  • recreational areas
  • sports facilities
  • educational institutions
  • schools
  • libraries
  • accessibility
  • industrial zones
  • outskirts
  • noise and pollution
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