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The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar and line graphs illustrate data about the Olympics, specifically focusing on the
number
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 and gender of
participants
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.
Overall
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, the
number
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 of athletes has shown a positive trend, with a majority being male. As depicted in the illustration, the first Olympics took place in 1924, featuring approximately three thousand
participants
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. Most of these were
men
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, with nearly one hundred
women
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. After 28 years, the
number
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 of
participants
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 increased to 5,000.
Although
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 the
number
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 of
women
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 had risen, the majority remained male, with almost 4,500
men
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. The charts indicate that the
number
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 of
participants
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had
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 doubled since the beginning. By the 1984 Olympics, there were approximately 7,000
participants
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, with a gender ratio of nearly 1 to 3—5,000
men
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 and 1,500
women
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, respectively. The final year represented in the data is 2012. At
this
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 time, the
number
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 of
women
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 surged to nearly 5,000, marking the best result for female participation.
Men
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 numbered only 1,000, bringing the total to 11,000 athletes.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, participants, men, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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