the chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for coca-cola.write a report for a university lecturer describing the information show below.

the chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for coca-cola.write a report for a university lecturer describing the information show below.
The pie chart shows
information
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the information
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the
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about the
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refions
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regions
which buy more
Coca-Cola
. The graph shows
total
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the total
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sales of
Coca-Cola
in different regions.
Overall
it can be seen that
Coca-Cola
is more popular in
the
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apply
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America
than
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in onother
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onother
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other
region
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regions
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. On the whole
middle east
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Middle East
show examples
buy
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buys
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less
Coca-Cola
that
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than
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Asia and Europe. And the
price
of
Coca-Cola
rose in 1998 to 85$. In terms of
seles
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sales
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Coca-Cola
in Asia in almost half of
sales
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the sales
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in
America
.
While
Twice as
Asias
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Asian
people buy
Coca-Cola
than
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in
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Africa and
Middle
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the Middle
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East. North
America
is not quite as sales
Coca- Cola
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Coca-Cola
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as Latin
America
. Coca-Colas
Price
rise
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slightly between 1996 to 1997.
Price
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The price
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of
coca-cola
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Coca-Cola
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in 2000 was nowhere near as expensive as
1998
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in 1998
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. And the
price
of that fluctuated between 1998 to 2000. And was
rise
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rose
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slightly in 3 years between 1996 to 1997.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coca-cola, america, price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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