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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph provides data on the average
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dioxide
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 emissions per individual in 4 countries, namely the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy,
as well as
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 Portugal in the period of 50 years, particularly from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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, the highest
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dioxide
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 production for 2007 is observed in the UK, despite a moderate decrease.
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, a downward trend was observed in the UK and Sweden,
while
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 an upward trend was seen in Italy and Portugal. To start, the lowest amount of CO2 was in 1967 in Portugal where it was equal to less than 2 metric
tonnes
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 per person.
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, after a noticeable growth, the number constituted approximately 6 metric
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 per person. The amount of
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dioxide
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 emission in Italy was more than in Portugal, particularly a bit more than 4 metric
tonnes
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 in the beginning and about 8 metric
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 in 2007.
Although
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dioxide
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emission
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 made up just above 10 metric
tonnes
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 in 1977 in Sweden, after a significant drop, the figure comprised well over 5 metric
tonnes
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 in 2007. The biggest amount of
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dioxide
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 in all years was in the UK, obviously, in 1967 the indicator accounted for roughly 11 metric
tonnes
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 but accounted for nearly 9 metric
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 in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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