You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. They are from the United States in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie and bar charts
showed
the percentage of poverty in the United States in 2008. These data were divided by the Wrong verb form
show
women
’s status: single or marry
with children, and compared with males and age Change the form of the verb
married
groups
.
The United States Bureau 2008’s report revealed significant information in this
survey which females
had an income lower than males, especially young adult women
, and infant girls who had a poverty rate
of 20%, and most of these groups
were unmarried women
without children which covered a half of all. While
married women
had a percentage lower than 10% in these groups
. In addition
, female poverty showed a fluctuating trend in the second chart that
Change preposition
in
adolescents
and immature Correct pronoun usage
which adolescents
females
dropped to 15%, and upped to 20%, respectively. Later, their income was higher than those groups
by the poor rate
in middle age decreased from 15% to 10%. Moreover
, the retired women
had a low income rate
of 15%.
Although
males had higher salaries than females
, their trend
were similar Fix the agreement mistake
trends
with
Change preposition
to
females
which had as
equal Correct your spelling
an
as
proportion in Change preposition
apply
the
infants and teens, dropped to 10% in the mature adults, had the lowest Correct article usage
apply
rate
in the
middle age, and the retired Correct article usage
apply
groups
were below 10%.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, females, women, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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