You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. They are from the United States in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie and bar charts
showed
the percentage of poverty in the United States in 2008. These data were divided by the Wrong verb form
show
women
’s status: single or Use synonyms
marry
with children, and compared with males and age Change the form of the verb
married
groups
.
The United States Bureau 2008’s report revealed significant information in Use synonyms
this
survey which Linking Words
females
had an income lower than males, especially young adult Use synonyms
women
, and infant girls who had a poverty Use synonyms
rate
of 20%, and most of these Use synonyms
groups
were unmarried Use synonyms
women
without children which covered a half of all. Use synonyms
While
married Linking Words
women
had a percentage lower than 10% in these Use synonyms
groups
. Use synonyms
In addition
, female poverty showed a fluctuating trend in the second chart Linking Words
that
Change preposition
in
adolescents
and immature Correct pronoun usage
which adolescents
females
dropped to 15%, and upped to 20%, respectively. Later, their income was higher than those Use synonyms
groups
by the poor Use synonyms
rate
in middle age decreased from 15% to 10%. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the retired Linking Words
women
had a low income Use synonyms
rate
of 15%.
Use synonyms
Although
males had higher salaries than Linking Words
females
, their Use synonyms
trend
were similar Fix the agreement mistake
trends
with
Change preposition
to
females
which had Use synonyms
as
equal Correct your spelling
an
as
proportion in Change preposition
apply
the
infants and teens, dropped to 10% in the mature adults, had the lowest Correct article usage
apply
rate
in Use synonyms
the
middle age, and the retired Correct article usage
apply
groups
were below 10%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, females, women, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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