You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. They are from the United States in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie and bar charts

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the percentage of poverty in the United States in 2008. These data were divided by the

women

’s status: single or

marry

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married

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with children, and compared with males and age

groups

. The United States Bureau 2008’s report revealed significant information in

this

survey which

females

had an income lower than males, especially young adult

women

, and infant girls who had a poverty

rate

of 20%, and most of these

groups

were unmarried

women

without children which covered a half of all.

While

married

women

had a percentage lower than 10% in these

groups

.

In addition

, female poverty showed a fluctuating trend in the second chart

that

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in

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adolescents

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which adolescents

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and immature

females

dropped to 15%, and upped to 20%, respectively. Later, their income was higher than those

groups

by the poor

rate

in middle age decreased from 15% to 10%.

Moreover

, the retired

women

had a low income

rate

of 15%.

Although

males had higher salaries than

females

, their

trend

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trends

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were similar

with

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to

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females

which had

as

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an

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equal

as

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apply

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proportion in

the

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infants and teens, dropped to 10% in the mature adults, had the lowest

rate

in

the

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middle age, and the retired

groups

were below 10%.