The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides data on the number of males and females visiting different evening
courses
conducted at an adult education centre in 2009, while
the pie chart depicts information on their ages.
Overall
, women
visited courses
more than men
. Additionally
, most women
attended language courses
, while
more men
preferred to visit
painting Verb problem
attend
courses
. It is obvious that most of the visitors
were aged 50 or higher.
To start, 10 men
and double amount of women
attended the drama course
, while
approximately 25 males and exactly 30 females visited
the painting Verb problem
attended
course
. In contrast
, visitors
representing both genders were least likely to visit the sculpture course
, particularly 10 men
and a halved amount of women
. However
, the language course
is one of the most famous ones there as 40 women
and 20 men
attend it.
Clearly, most visitors
, particularly 42% belonged to the age group of 50 or higher, unlikely the young aged under 20 years, who were least likely to visit these courses
as their ratio comprised 5%. Other visitors
were in the age groups of 40-49, 30-39, and 20-29 and their proportions constituted 26%, 16% and 11% respectively.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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