The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides data on the number of males and females visiting different evening
courses
conducted at an adult education centre in 2009,
while
the pie chart depicts information on their ages.
Overall
,
women
visited
courses
more than
men
.
Additionally
, most
women
attended language
courses
,
while
more
men
preferred to
visit
Verb problem
attend
show examples
painting
courses
. It is obvious that most of the
visitors
were aged 50 or higher. To start, 10
men
and double amount of
women
attended the drama
course
,
while
approximately 25 males and exactly 30 females
visited
Verb problem
attended
show examples
the painting
course
.
In contrast
,
visitors
representing both genders were least likely to visit the sculpture
course
, particularly 10
men
and a halved amount of
women
.
However
, the language
course
is one of the most famous ones there as 40
women
and 20
men
attend it. Clearly, most
visitors
, particularly 42% belonged to the age group of 50 or higher, unlikely the young aged under 20 years, who were least likely to visit these
courses
as their ratio comprised 5%. Other
visitors
were in the age groups of 40-49, 30-39, and 20-29 and their proportions constituted 26%, 16% and 11% respectively.
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