Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?

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discuss

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the

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why

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stress

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been a lot in

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society

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provide a better place for life.

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that cause

stress

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become a terrible

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works

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pressure

in their job because the competition

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between each employee. They

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hope to be the best in a group of employees, so

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unseeable and untouchable competition

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the company.

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stressed group is

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the students

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. They have a lot of homework

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future

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and do not want to lose the progress in the class. They

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get unstable and nervous

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their future

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each student. The solution that can be solved the

stress

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many.

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people must only focus on themselves, they do not need to care

other

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people

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they are doing, what they

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on,

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they have

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better

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with you. It

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does not matter to

yourself

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to make your own

decision

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to

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your life.

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the future which is what they want. Do not think

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consequence

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first,

just only do what you want.

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method is already enough for their fundamental

stress

which they concern. In the conclusion of the essay,

stress

is a

commonly

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homework for everyone. What we need to learn is how to solve the

stress

healthy. When you

over

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the

stress

this

time, you must be

a

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stronger to challenge the new

stress

next time.