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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of carbon dioxide emitted per
indvidual
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individual
 in
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UK
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the UK
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, Sweden, Italy and Portugal in 40
years
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 from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric
tonnes
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.
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 the emission of
this
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 gas increased significantly in
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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 and Portugal over the
years
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while
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 it kept declining
slighlty
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slightly
 over the time span of 40
years
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 in
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UK
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the UK
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 and Sweden. Portugal and Italy followed almost similar trends. Starting from almost 1 metric tonne in 1976, the percentage of emission per human in
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 kept increasing till 1997 to roughly 7 metric
tonnes
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 that remained
same
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the same
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 till 2007.
Consequently
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,
begining
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beginning
 with a sharp increase to
aproximately
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approximately
 7 metric
tonnes
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 by 2017 from
a
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 emission of a bit more than 4 metric
tonnes
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 by 1997, it kept rising
slighlty
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slightly
 till 1997 to less than 6 metric
tonnes
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 and remained the till 2007. In
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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, it kept declining between the
fourty
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forty
four
years
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 from a bit less than 11 to almost 9 by 1967 to 2007 respectively. Unlike
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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, the amount of carbon dioxide
relased
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released
in
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atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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 rose till 1997 to a bit higher than 10 metric
tonnes
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 from less than 9 metric
tonnes
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 by 1967. Moving forward, it dramatically kept declining till 2007 to less than 6
metrictonnes
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metric tonnes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, years, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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