The maps show the transformation of the village of Eastminster over a ten-year period.

The maps show the transformation of the village of Eastminster over a ten-year period.
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The maps show the transformation of the village of Eastminster over a ten-year period, from 1999 to 2009.
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, Eastminster underwent significant urbanization, with a reduction in open spaces and an increase in housing and commercial developments. The changes occurred on both sides of the
river
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that divides the village, with notable developments in the north and south. To the north of the
river
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, the woodland that existed in 1999 was transformed into an adventure park by 2009. The large house with gardens, once prominent in the centre, was replaced by a hotel with a golf course. Additional houses were constructed,
further
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encroaching on the park area. The school that was previously located on the south bank of the
river
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was relocated to the north.
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, in the southern part of Eastminster, the area experienced significant development. The streets of houses in 1999 were demolished, and by 2009, blocks of flats (apartment blocks) had been built. Where a public garden stood in 1999, more houses were developed. Factories and warehouses were
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constructed along the railway line to the east.
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, a shopping complex was built near the
river
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, replacing the former shops. The hospital, which remained in the same location, was expanded in 2009.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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