The graph shows sales of songs from three musical genres during a period of ten years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line chart illustrated number
of music songs on Change the article
a number
the number
spotify
based on three music genres in a decade (2009-2019).
Change the capitalization
Spotify
Overall
, Korean
pop
and Jazz
dramatically increased in sales
and Korean
pop
had become
the most popular among Wrong verb form
became
three
genres. Correct article usage
the three
However
, pop
fall
significantly in the same period.
In 2009, Wrong verb form
fell
Although
Pop
was the most popular music genre, around
250 Change preposition
with around
million
was
sold, Unnecessary verb
apply
Pop
consistently decline
and Wrong verb form
declined
Korean
pop
had surpass
Wrong verb form
surpassed
Pop
in term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
sales
in 2013. Korean
pop
achieved 275 million
while
Pop
only generated sales
around
170 Change preposition
of around
million
. Moreover
, Jazz
also
slightly increased and reach
90 Wrong verb form
reached
million
in 2013.
Starting 2014
, Change preposition
in 2014
Korean
pop
sales
had significantly increased,
and reached Remove the comma
apply
the
peak in 2019, around 500 Correct article usage
a
million
. While
Pop
could not bounce back and steadily decreased until 2016, around 150 million
. Conversely
, Jazz
had
Unnecessary verb
apply
consistenly
rose and reached as same as Correct your spelling
consistently
pop
in term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
sales
in 2016. 2017-2019, number
of Change the article
a number
the number
sales
for Pop
and Jazz
had
remained stable Unnecessary verb
apply
in
150 Change preposition
at
million
per year.Submitted by muhammad.andhitya on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words korean, pop, jazz, sales, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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