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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the number of underground station
passengers
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 in London.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the figure for
passengers
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 had a significant fluctuation during all time. Observing the chart in more detail, the
passengers
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's number climbed remarkably from about 100
passengers
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 to around 400
passengers
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 on 8.00. Before plummeting gradually to approximately 190
passengers
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 on 10.00. During the time from 10.00 to 14.00 hours the number of
passengers
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 sorted with roughly 300
passengers
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.
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, over the time from 16.00 to 18.00 the figure for
passengers
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 had a significant rocket accounting for about 100
passengers
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 and around 390
passengers
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 respectively.
Then
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 it dropped slightly before a slow increase at 20.00 with almost 190
passengers
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words passengers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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