The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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‏The pie chart illustrates the figure of budget UAE government consumption in 2000.
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, it can be clearly seen that had the highest consumption.
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, transport was seen as the lowest figure. ‏Observing the chart in more detail, social security had the largest
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of consumers with 100
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. Health and personal social were the second roughly 53.The
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of education was double the
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of law accounting for about 17 and nearly 38 respectively. ‏
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, the amount in housing heritage and environment was almost 15
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which was less than the
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of other expenditures of 23
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. One striking piece of information to be noticed is that both other
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and debit internet had an equal amount of around 23
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