The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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manufacture

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process for making

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from

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cane.

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, there are seven steps

of

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the process

to transform

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of transforming

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sugar

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canes

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cane

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into

sugar

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. In terms of producing

sugar

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,

a the

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sugar

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canes, which are the main ingredients, were

growth

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first for 12 - 18 months. It

then

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can be harvested in two ways, manually by people and by a machine. After that, the

sugar

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canes

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cane

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then

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put into a crushing machine in order to be transformed into

a

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juice. To purify the juice, it has to

put

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into

limestone

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a limestone

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filter and heated by

evaporator

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an evaporator

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machine to

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become a syrup. In order to take the

sugar

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crystals

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contained in the syrup, it requires a centrifugal process.

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, after being separated from the syrup,  

sugar

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crystals have to be dried and cooled to be

sugar

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.