The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The illustration presents the

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of making

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from

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cane

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.

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, the whole

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relies heavily on machines and some human labour. It takes more than one year to produce one lot of

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.

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the longest session is waiting for the

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cane

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to fully grows.

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the

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cane

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is grown. It takes about one and a half

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for the

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cane

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to become ready for harvest, and they can be harvested by machine and human labourers. After that, the

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cane

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is crushed in the machine to produce juice.

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, the juice is purified in

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filter made from limestones.

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the juice is heated in the evaporator and turns into syrup. The syrup is placed in the machine to separate

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crystals from syrup by spinning in the centrifuge.

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, the

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crystals are left to dry and cool down in the container, waiting to be packed and sold. In conclusion, growing

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cane

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can take about eighteen months, which is regarded as the longest step

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the whole

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. In

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addition

, machines are essential to the whole

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of manufacturing

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.