It is a topic of great debate
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whether the judiciary should give corporal punishment to the criminals or they can ask them to do
community
service
instead
. In my opinion,
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view is more persuasive, as the desired results are difficult to achieve if we choose the latter approach and reasons to support my stance are elaborated in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, people who advocate that unpaid
community
work is an effective
way
assert that
this
way
could change
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criminal psychology and it can encourage them to become
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.
However
, I do not think that
this
idea has any practical value,
whereas
, imprisonment is an effective
way
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outcome by giving prisoners time to introspect their past mistakes.
On the other hand
, those who opine that corporal punishments are right
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that we cannot let go
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heinous
crimes
such
as murders, robberies etc. In fact, habitual offenders are a threat to
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societal peace and
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should not allow them to get away easily. To illustrate, in 2024 in Pune,India a minor was accused of murder of two people
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when he hit their motorbike with his car that he was driving.
Thus
, in
such
one must be prosecuted.
Adding more to it, if we set criminals free by just doing
community
service it will send a wrong message to
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society. Indeed, it will encourage people to commit
crimes
and get away with them.
For example
, a few European countries have tried
this
as a pilot project, but
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of
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in
crimes
, there was a surge in the crime rate.
Hence
, corporal
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the ideal
way
to control
crimes
.
To sum up
, undoubtedly, we can consider
community
services for less heinous
crimes
but when it comes to serious
crimes
the law must not let criminals get away easily to protect society and send a strong message
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the
community
.