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The graph below gives information about the pnumber of estimated cars from 2020 to 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below gives information about the pnumber of estimated cars from 2020 to 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the amount of cars manufactured in four different countries between 2020 and 2035.
Overall
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, Japan showed an upward trend in 2020,
although
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 it fell until 2035,
whereas
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 China hit the lowest point at the beginning.
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, the UK and the USA follow almost similar patterns during these years. Looking at the line more closely, one can see that compared to 2035 Japan was the dominant country in production of the cars with 350.000,though it is expected that the number will drop to 100.000 by 2035 which was the biggest reduction .
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, China was by far the least productive in the vehicle industry with 100 thousand, but it is supposed that it will slightly grow to 150.000 by 2035.
On the other hand
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, the UK and the USA follow the same path with some differences. The number of cars was 200 and 300 thousand respectively and
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 it is guessed that they both will decrease to a negligible quantity .

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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated number of cars
  • significant change
  • stable/increase/decrease
  • comparative analysis
  • urban planning
  • environmental impact
  • trend
  • notable year
  • long-term implications
  • data pattern
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