The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above table chart reveals data on the average money expenditure in the
UK
and France
on consumer goods in the year 2010.
Overall
, the most significant feature is the numbers of money spent on cars received the highest score in both countries. While
the lowest percentage was related to perfume expenditure in both countries.
It is noticeable that the number of cars shows dramatic growth from 400,000in France
to 450,000 in the UK
. In contrast
, the money spent on computers sharply decreased from approximately 380,000 in France
to 350,000 in the UK
. However
,the UK
spent about 400,000 on books while
France
spent just 300,000. In addition
, perfume expenditure had the weakest amount which is 150 in the UK
and 200 in France
. Furthermore
, the number spent on camera shows significant
difference between the two countries.
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Moreover
, the camera score contributed to be
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being
UK
within 350 then
started to decline gradually to 150 in France
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