The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Food/Drink/Tobacco Clothing/Footwear Leisure/Education Ireland 28.91% 6.43% 2.21% Italy 16.36% 9.00% 3.20% Spain 16.80% 6.51% 1.98% Sweden 15. 77% 5.40% 3.22% Turkey 32.14% 6.63% 4.35%

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Food/Drink/Tobacco  Clothing/Footwear  Leisure/Education

Ireland

28.91%  6.43%  2.21%

Italy

16.36%  9.00%  3.20% Spain

16.80% 6.51% 1.98% Sweden

15. 77% 5.40%

3.22%

Turkey 32.14%

6.63%  4.35%
The table compares customer expenditure on three various products in five different countries during 2002
Overall
, Turkey showed an upward trend in all types of items,
whereas
Spain and Sweden had by far the least consumer spending with a few fluctuations which was followed by Italy. Looking at the data more closely, one can see that compared to other nations, Turkey spent
much
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money on goods especially on food, drinks and tobacco with 32.14% and it was
also
dominant in other forms.
Furthermore
, Spain and Sweden hit the lowest point on almost every harvest with merely similar percentages
for example
, 1.98% and 3.22% on leisure and education respectively.
On the other hand
, the average expenditure of Italy on each field was slightly more than Spain with 9.00% on clothing and footwear sections.
Finally
, Ireland was the second highest civilisation that paid for all categories
such
as 28.91% purchase of tobacco.
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