The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line gives information about the changing rates of crimes including burglary car theft and robbery in Panama, between 2010 and 2019.
Overall
, it can be seen that burglaries were the most violent activity at the beginning of the year,
while
the number of people who theft cars was common
at the end
. The rate of robberies remained steady throughout the years.
To begin
with, the level of burglary was about 3450 and 2010.
Then
it witnessed a gradual increase in 2012 to almost 3700.
However
, the rate experienced a dramatic decrease in 2015 to 1000. The four years showed fluctuation. Cars stealing had the same pattern. It was about 2700
while
it had a decline to 2000 in 2013.
In contrast
, the number increased significantly until 2019 to nearly 2700.
On the other hand
, robbery was the lowest level of crime, it witnessed a slight fluctuation and remained
table
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stable
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throughout the years with about 700
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Crime rates
  • Fluctuated
  • Significant spike
  • Consistent trend
  • Prevalent
  • Cumulative change
  • Enforcement
  • Correlate
  • Reduction/increase in crime
  • Categories of crime
  • Level of crime
  • Period of time
  • Analysis
  • Data representation
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