The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The drawing illustrates a plan proposal for the placement of different functions for the new
town
.
Overall
, the place comes to a central area, which is a big open place for traffic and parking spaces.
Then
around it, in a circle form, different functions
while
the edges mark two big industry terrains north and south. In the middle of the
town
, there is a big open space where buses,
roads
and parking spots are situated. Despite
this
area being busy, houses and recreational spaces surround it. These houses are isolated with a circled ring road from the outside of the
town
where above on the left side, and bellow on the right side, there is an industrial area. The areas left are filled with different housing units separated by
roads
that are connected to the core of the
town
. The left side of the city has more of a united layout
whereas
the right has fewer functions and
roads
.
Lastly
, the
roads
are in a circle shape separating the main place from the houses.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, roads with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential housing
  • ring road
  • local roads
  • commercial zones
  • inhabitants
  • transportation system
  • bus terminals
  • train stations
  • recreational areas
  • sports facilities
  • educational institutions
  • schools
  • libraries
  • accessibility
  • industrial zones
  • outskirts
  • noise and pollution
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