The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the
percentage
of adult male Use synonyms
smokers
in seven countries Use synonyms
along with
the world average in 2000 and 2015.
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Overall
, America has the highest Linking Words
percentage
of masculine Use synonyms
smokers
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whereas
Australia has the lowest Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
smokers
male population. It is important to note that in 2000 there were more male Use synonyms
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in 2015 there were the lowest percentages of masculine Linking Words
smokers
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In 2000, America was the country with the most male Use synonyms
smokers
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with
65%, followed by Bangladesh, Cuba and the World with 62%, 52%, and 42% of masculine Change preposition
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smokers
, respectively. In the same year Egypt, Lebanon and Mexico had the same Use synonyms
percentage
of individuals that smoke Use synonyms
with
35%. The lowest Change preposition
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percentage
of male Use synonyms
smokers
was in Australia with 28%.
In 2015, America and Cuba had the same Use synonyms
percentage
of masculine smoker populations Use synonyms
with
51%. Egypt had a slightly similar Change preposition
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percentage
with 49% male Use synonyms
smokers
which increased from 2000. Followed by Lebanon, Bangladesh and the World with 42%, 39% and 32% masculine individuals that smoke, respectively. The lowest percentages that we observed in 2015 were the countries of Mexico and Australia with 20% and 18% of male Use synonyms
smokers
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