The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1981- 2014. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant.

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report is to describe the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from the

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1981 to the

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2007. The data is based on a graph.

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, the three jam types are:

butter

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,

margarine

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and other

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and reduced spreads. At the beginning of the

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it can be seen that

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and

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had already been known

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other

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and reduced spreads came into play only in the

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1996. Given the

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it can be seen that from the start

butter

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was the most popular choice until 1991 when

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took its place and

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been declining ever since

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.

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the

margarine

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reached its top in 1991 and had been steadily used till 1996 it wasn’t always the first choice as people chose

butter

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more until 1991 and after 2006.

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, in 2001 other

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and reduced spreads had reached

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and instantly started dropping again but

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still used the most in 2007. As usual, most graphic analysis has a

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and

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up and down later, but

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margarine

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broke

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stereotype and stayed

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1991 and 1996. The

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’s

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was in 1986 and gradually going down it never had any other peaks. And

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low fat and reduced spreads were only found in 1996 it reached its

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in five years and matched the

margarines

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use of that

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and had been on top of other jams until the analysis was finished. Generally, both the

butter

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and the

margarine

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had been on top of the most used spread for 10 years until other

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and reduced spreads took the top. All of them had their peaks and usually made a notable trip down after.