The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrates the possible places for a new supermarket in the

town

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of Garlsdon. There are two sites that are more probable. The total population of

the

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Garsdon

town

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is roughly 65000 and it has three

neighbors

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. Hindon,

bransdon

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Brandon

Branson

and Cransdon

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have

the

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population of 10000, 15000,

29000

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and 29000

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respectively. The first site, S1, is near to Hindon with the least number of people.

However

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,

this

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place is far from

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town

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the town

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centre. It is

placed

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located

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on

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in

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the

northern west

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northernwest

of the

town

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, near the industry facilities and houses in the northern

part

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.

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, there is a railway that

go

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through the

town

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centre and

connect

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connects

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the west

part

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to the east

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of the

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for better transportation. The second site, S2,

located

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is located

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in

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town

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the town

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centre

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that

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and

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is not a traffic zone. S2

in

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apply

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is near two other towns that have

greater

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a greater

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population. The

town

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city is surrounded by

industry

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industrial

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places shown in brown

in

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on

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the map. S2 is a better option for those people

reside

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residing

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in

southern

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the southern

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part

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of the

town

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.