The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts illustrate the ratio of the various transportation methods in Cambridge, UK in 2008 and 2018.
Overall
, after a decade, the preference for motorized vehicles which emit carbon dioxide as a transport lessened significantly
while
walking and riding bicycles increased dramatically. Cars and Buses took around 70% of the transport mode in 2008 with 42% and 30% respectively, with personal motor vehicles declining significantly to 20% becoming the least popular way of riding, followed by the bus dwindling slightly from 30% to 25% in 2018.
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for public riding decreased compared to 2008, people still tend to use
this
method. Aside from the other rides, Walking and cycling were the least consumed vehicles in 2008 with 11% and 17% respectively.
Nevertheless
, in 2018 walking and bicycling consumption saw a spike of approximately twice as much as in 2008 with 13% each. Riding bicycles became the most popular transportation in 2018
as well as
walking became the second.
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