You have seen an advertisement in an Australia magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look aftr their six-years- old - child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - explain why you would like the job - give details fo why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
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Dear Collins,
I have read your advertisement in Australia magazine and I am interested in looking after your child. My name is Anna, I am 22
years
old. I study a
university in Poland. I am interested in visiting Australia.
I love little Change preposition
at a
children
, I have younger siblings and I had to take care of them whole my childhood. I study at university, specification as a teacher in the kindergarten and OSH.
I have a lot of experience from the summer camps where I was the team leader of the children
(the group aged 5-8). I started this
job since my 16 years
old. I have received the certificate to take care of the children
and the first avoid. I worked as babysitter
for the Add an article
a babysitter
last
5 years
with children
aged 3-8 years
old. I have certificate C1 in English, German and Spain, I could teach your child these languages if you want.
I would like to spend my free time travelling, meeting new people, discovering new cultures and proofing my English.
If my email is interesting for you, please let me know, I will be happy to meet you and your child.
Kind regards
Andrea KroupaSubmitted by andrea.kroupova on
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task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the task more comprehensively, such as providing more personal motivation or specific activities you would like to do.
coherence cohesion
Consider improving the logical structure by presenting a clearer sequence of information.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens and closes with appropriate greetings and signing off.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph handles a distinct point from the task requirements, showing an organized approach.
task achievement
Your writing tone is polite and appropriate for an application letter.
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