Social
media
I guess that the
impact
of social
media
on society might be very different. Yes, social
media
really
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the costs of connections between people from different countries but it
also
can be the
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for
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of terrorism and
. In my opinion, we mustn’t forget about these risks especially nowadays. As we can see, in
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world the problem of terrorism is actual yet.
, a
lot
of terrorists today use different internet platforms to communicate and plan operations. In my opinion, governments all over the world should pay
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attention to
this
problem and social
media
can’t be
uncontrollable.
Grading
The topic of grading has generated much discussion in recent years. My personal belief is that grading can really say a
lot
about
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knowledge. It is essential for
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university
to know whether
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or not. After
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this
university
and if
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demonstrates bad knowledge
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the workplace it will decrease the reputation of
this
university
that
overall
will have
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bad
impact
on
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. But if
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are studying
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the
university
can dismiss
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before graduation. I understand Lida’s concern over the grading but I believe she misses
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point that I provided.
Taxing unhealthy products
The topic of taxing unhealthy products has generated much discussion in recent years. My personal belief is that it can be
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good idea that might increase social welfare. Unhealthy products especially with a
lot
of sugar can trigger addiction that after all will have
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on
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health. I understand Tanya’s concern over the families with low income but I believe that she misses another important point. We can use the revenue from
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to increase subsidies to
such
families and
this
initiative will have
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impact
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these families. Because of
this
I believe that we should at least try to realise
such
taxing.
AI
The topic of AI has generated much discussion in recent years. My personal belief is that AI technology has more benefits
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minuses. I can’t agree with Megan about the rising inequality after using AI. We shouldn’t avoid
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of new technologies only because they will change the labour market. As
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engine, AI will cause a
lot
of big changes in
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market but after all
implementation
of
such
will increase
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social welfare. I guess that
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of AI government should help those workers who lost their
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.
Overall
, I think that with
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implementation
of AI will be a really good idea.