he first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The two pie charts illustrate the breakdown of
energy
usage in an average Australian household and the corresponding greenhouse
gas
emissions
generated by each energy
use category.
In the first chart, it is evident that heating consumes the largest share of energy
in Australian households, accounting for 42% of total usage. This
is followed by water
heating, which takes up 30%, while
other appliances constitute 15%. Lighting and refrigeration use relatively smaller proportions of energy
, at 4% and 7%, respectively. Cooling represents the smallest portion, consuming just 2% of the total energy
.
In contrast
, the second chart reveals that water
heating is responsible for the highest percentage of greenhouse
gas
emissions
, producing 32% of the total. Other appliances also
contribute significantly, generating 28% of emissions
. Heating, despite using the most energy
, accounts for only 15% of emissions
, while
refrigeration produces 14%. Lighting and cooling make up 8% and 3% of emissions
, respectively.
A comparison of the two charts shows that while
heating dominates energy
usage, it contributes relatively less to greenhouse
gas
emissions
. On the other hand
, water
heating and other appliances play a more prominent role in emissions
than in energy
consumption. This
indicates that certain energy
uses, like heating, are more efficient in terms of emissions
, whereas
others, such
as water
heating, are less environmentally friendly.
In summary, the data suggests that households in Australia could potentially reduce greenhouse
gas
emissions
by focusing on more efficient water
heating and appliance use, as these categories contribute significantly to emissions
despite consuming less energy
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