The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Wite the essay in 150 words.

The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Wite the essay in 150 words.
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The map compared how developments from local districts to modernization between two different periods 1930 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is clear to see that in the past
this
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zone was a farming land and the living of animals and humans. but after expansion, the living of humans have more space than animals.
to begin
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with, is it noticeable that in 1930
this
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land had river stock across the area and a bridge connecting two sides.
Moreover
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,
this
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province has standard facilities like; shops, primary schools, post offices, farmland and personal areas that give convince to local people in the city.
In contrast
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, the figure for 2010 shows that urbanization in several places has been modified.
For instance
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, the shop is diverse in houses
also
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cow addresses. Even so, the post office and bridge still stay in the same place; the primary school is converted to be larger than before and the personnel area is changed to houses and retirement houses.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • modernization
  • infrastructure
  • development
  • expansion
  • urbanization
  • replacement
  • redevelopment
  • renovation
  • gentrification
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