The pie charts show the changes in the proportions for different forms transport which people used to get to their offices and turn back in a European city in 1959 and 2009

The pie charts show the changes in the proportions for different forms transport which people used to get to their offices and turn back in a European city in 1959 and 2009
The two pie charts give information about the changes in the transportation system used by individuals from and to their work in a particular European city in 1959 and 2009.
Overall
, it can be seen that walking was the highest popular among people in the first year,
while
cars were the lowest.
In addition
, using a car was the most common in the second year.
To begin
with, nearly half of the employees walked to their offices in 1959,
however
, the rate decreased dramatically in 2009 to 25%. Meanwhile, the proportion of used cars was at least 10 % in 1959, it increased significantly to 35 percentage in 2009. other transport sectors were at 5% in 1995, the number witnessed a gradual rise in 2009 at 12%
On the other hand
, the percentage of individuals who used trains remained stable in both the years 1959 and 2009 at 15%.
In contrast
, passes experienced a slight decline in 2009 to 13%
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • modes of transport
  • private transport
  • public transport
  • car ownership
  • cycling
  • pedestrian
  • commuter trends
  • urban infrastructure
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental sustainability
  • public policy
  • evolution
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • decade
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • reliability
  • urban planning
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